She is smiling
Will you smile?
The night is dark, the wind is howling
The curtains blow, the rain starts drizzling
What should I do? Should I believe?
Is this life? Is this love?
I sit in a corner, I am waiting
My heart is restless, I am searching
I think of days past, I hear your laughter
I think of tomorrow, Its just tears and rain
Memories come flooding
With pain my heart’s searing
Why did you leave? What did I do?
I have everything, I have nothing
The rain stops, my heart pauses
Time stops, and the wait is haunting
The tears start to flow
My heart is letting go
I look up, I see you looking down
I see you, I feel your touch
I know you’re near
Are you smiling?
11 Comments:
hey that's a deep sentiment being conveyed in here.
well a mind in love will always have a lot to pour.
lovely musing
hope am not committing a booboo either;)
By Scoot, at 12:19 PM
He he..word of the week: 'booboo'...mind in love is right! I think everyone should be in love all the time...just with different things.
Thanks for your positive reinforcement Maya, but I know what I can do and what I should NOT do ;). Are you this nice to all your patients?
Ram
By Ram, at 2:06 PM
yeah I know...I proclaim booboo as an official cute word in my dictionary from now on.cheers to you for that.
and yes,I wish everyone be in love with something or the other all the time.it makes one happy:)
haha your writing is great.
and yes,I am nice to my patients unless they step on my toe and refuse to budge;)
By Scoot, at 3:01 PM
Awesome poem dude!! You totally rock!
//The rain stops, my heart pauses
Time stops, and the wait is haunting
Wait defenitly is hauting on my side.
Cheers,
NY?
P.s :waiting for more to come up..
By radiantbear, at 1:44 AM
Hello NY - thanks! I guess the more intense the waiting, the greater the pleasure. Hope it all works out for the best. And thanks for stopping by - keep in touch!
By Ram, at 11:51 PM
Yea, no gain without pain :)Nice poem. I am jus jealous about your creativity and how you have time for so many things in your life.
By Sattvic, at 8:09 PM
beautifully written poem ram...
By NaiKutti, at 8:38 PM
Sattvic, come on ! Creativity...well, right back at you.
Thanks Karthik!
Asathiteenga Raz...very well said!
By Ram, at 9:27 PM
hey it is a beautiful poem
a smile ...
By AJ ! Serendipity !!!, at 4:23 AM
Great Poem, Ram.
The intensity of love is felt more in the separation..
There is a mystic aura around those words.. Great work!
Regards,
Srijith
By srijithunni, at 10:12 PM
Thanks Ajay, and glad you stopped by.
Thank you Srijith - it is an honor when the "guru" praises the "disciple"!!
Ram
By Ram, at 10:53 PM
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