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The Muse

April 04, 2006

She is smiling



Will you smile?


The night is dark, the wind is howling
The curtains blow, the rain starts drizzling
What should I do? Should I believe?
Is this life? Is this love?

I sit in a corner, I am waiting
My heart is restless, I am searching
I think of days past, I hear your laughter
I think of tomorrow, Its just tears and rain

Memories come flooding
With pain my heart’s searing
Why did you leave? What did I do?
I have everything, I have nothing

The rain stops, my heart pauses
Time stops, and the wait is haunting
The tears start to flow
My heart is letting go


I look up, I see you looking down
I see you, I feel your touch
I know you’re near
Are you smiling?

12 Comments:

  • hey that's a deep sentiment being conveyed in here.
    well a mind in love will always have a lot to pour.
    lovely musing
    hope am not committing a booboo either;)

    By Blogger Maya Cassis, at 12:19 PM  

  • He he..word of the week: 'booboo'...mind in love is right! I think everyone should be in love all the time...just with different things.

    Thanks for your positive reinforcement Maya, but I know what I can do and what I should NOT do ;). Are you this nice to all your patients?

    Ram

    By Blogger Ram, at 2:06 PM  

  • yeah I know...I proclaim booboo as an official cute word in my dictionary from now on.cheers to you for that.
    and yes,I wish everyone be in love with something or the other all the time.it makes one happy:)
    haha your writing is great.
    and yes,I am nice to my patients unless they step on my toe and refuse to budge;)

    By Blogger Maya Cassis, at 3:01 PM  

  • Awesome poem dude!! You totally rock!

    //The rain stops, my heart pauses
    Time stops, and the wait is haunting


    Wait defenitly is hauting on my side.

    Cheers,

    NY?

    P.s :waiting for more to come up..

    By Blogger Nanyaar?, at 1:44 AM  

  • Hello NY - thanks! I guess the more intense the waiting, the greater the pleasure. Hope it all works out for the best. And thanks for stopping by - keep in touch!

    By Blogger Ram, at 11:51 PM  

  • Yea, no gain without pain :)Nice poem. I am jus jealous about your creativity and how you have time for so many things in your life.

    By Blogger Sattvic, at 8:09 PM  

  • beautifully written poem ram...

    By Blogger NaiKutti, at 8:38 PM  

  • kathu irupathin sugam...
    kadhalil perithu!

    By Blogger raz, at 8:47 PM  

  • Sattvic, come on ! Creativity...well, right back at you.

    Thanks Karthik!

    Asathiteenga Raz...very well said!

    By Blogger Ram, at 9:27 PM  

  • hey it is a beautiful poem
    a smile ...

    By Blogger Ajay, at 4:23 AM  

  • Great Poem, Ram.

    The intensity of love is felt more in the separation..

    There is a mystic aura around those words.. Great work!

    Regards,
    Srijith

    By Blogger Srijith Unni, at 10:12 PM  

  • Thanks Ajay, and glad you stopped by.

    Thank you Srijith - it is an honor when the "guru" praises the "disciple"!!

    Ram

    By Blogger Ram, at 10:53 PM  

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